Smitten
by Payton Lee
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Description:A handsome Prince seeks life mate. He's not looking for physical beauty alone. He needs an intelligent and caring Princess to be his partner. He finds her in his own backyard after searching the world for her. Things aren't too simple. Someone's trying to kill his bride, Princess Rigan. An invitation to sit back and read an adult fairy tale. Keywords:Listed in: |
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I've read Smitten and some of your other works and have loved them. So keep up the dood work and publishmore stories!
i was hoping to see David's story or may be even Aleck's story. Now that would be interestingQ
i was hoping to see David's story or may be even Aleck's story. Now that would be interestingQ
This was a wonderful book and i really enjoyed it. I wouldn't change a thing about it and i love the characters. Paul is absolutely hilarious when he is courting Rigan and later on when he was all 'protective'. Is there going to be a story on David, i would love to hear his romance story.
An excellent read. It has all the elements of a fairy tale that can be visualised in the adult mind.
the basic premise is interesting. characters r well-etched out . the start is good, but its downhill from there onwards. need to make it a lot more taut. delete almost half of it n make the villain a bit more threatening. all the best.
The story itself is entertaining, and with some serious editing and research into the historical timeperiod, it will be absolutely wonderful!
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