This piece has a good idea for a foundation but could definently be expanded on. The pictures could be better in quality. It gives new terms that children would not nessesarily know before reading the book which is a very good thing and I believe it's purpose.

I think this book needs clearer pictures and definitions of the pictures. Children don’t necessary know what cleats or shin guards are. Unless the reader has played soccer in the past they won’t know some of the terms. I really liked the title page and layout, just need work on the pictures.