I especially like the repetition of the word "fate." Is it fate? Just fate? It's not just fate.

I agree; it's not just fate. :)

The spirit of creation dances through this verse like an aurora haunts the northern sky. Young talent such as this should be honed and nourished, lest it slip away.

Good luck!
Bonnie, the Aurorawolf

Wow! These reviews makes me feel very amazed. Who would of thought so many people would like MY book? I didn't think my poetry was that great! I am amazed! I really am thankful for everyone's comments. It makes me feel so happy that people like MY writing. If only my spelling could improve... eh haha... yeah right. Well, anyhow! My best friend Megan and I wrote a book about the end times called Akron I' Thlipsis recently. I really need some reviews and comments on that book. So please look it up on the search... it's called Akron I' Thlipsis in case you forget.

Blessings,
Caitlyn J. Nanna

You are a wonderful writer. Keep up the good work. It makes a person stop and think.

Would that all who "question everything when it is all so clear" would read your work to hear a heart that beats for the Creator. The Lord has put a literary gift in your soul Caitlyn and it will bless those who stop for a moment to drink from it's refreshing flow.

Your poetic voice comes across clear and strong! Was it your fate or the chance God has given you a wonderful talent? This is excellent! An absolute brillient piece! May God bless you always.

Wow - it starts subtle and then it hits like a hammer.
Great work.

This poet asks profound questions, of a rhetorical nature. She discerns the hand of God the creator all around us. The poem could no doubt be set to music. Good work!!

Caitlyn, I saw your away message advertising your book and I had to come here and get a preview of it. Caitlyn, you're so awesome and smart! God has given you amazing talents...don't ever forget what an awesome girl you are! Maybe I'll see you around the holidays if you come down to visit your grandparents and family! I'm sure I'll be over at Tiffany's sometime.
Shawna :-)

From one poet to another - YOU HAVE IT + I hope to see more of your wonderful + spiritual poetry. God Bless! Your last post on THE POETRY CORNER was exceptional, too! I (for one) can NOT wait to see more GOOD STUFF from you!
Peace + Love!
Earl.

caitlyn, you have the God given talen to go far in life with this. you know you do so there is no point in arguing. keep it up and remember, keep God first and dont ever stop writing just because someone doesnt like it. just because they dont, doesnt mean someone else doesnt love it.

Caitlyn has written a very compelling and moving story of faith and personal belief. Questions are asked that perhaps several people on the face of this earth should seriously ask themselves. An exceptional write and a must read. Great job Caitlyn. Rock on! ~valentyne~ lang

If you keep writing like this, then you will be a truly great poet one day. This is very, very good and not just for a teenager, it's very good by anyone's standards. The sentiment is expressed well too. 'A leap of faith' type thing. After a couple of seconds of thinking about, I also liked the layout, it added to its rhythm. One thing, there are some, very minor but there, typos etc. Iron these out, and it will be perfect.
PS If you are worried about this being a load of old flannel, don't be. I don't review works I truly dislike, and will be appropriately critical if there's basic promise.
Well done
John Haines ( Josh Rogan )