Great story & plot for an erotica. That said, I must say that the dialog does not flow, and is not realistic, there are grammatical errors, the writing is in no way descriptive enough, and the vocabulary is vulgar and atrocious. It leaves out important details to later that should have been mentioned in the beginning, and it leaves out things that grammatically must be in there, and it replaces them with things that are not used in books like "X university" or "whatever his name is" those are not used in books, especially works of fiction. I am sorry, but I have to give this book a "Yikes!" rating, it just simply needs to be rewritten.