my book in progress

[Karla Alcorn]

Okay so i have a real generic layout of my book in a website and it's link is... http://rawemotions.wordpress.com. Now mind you what is taking me so long is the editing and the actually filling out but can someone please read my blogs on that site and give me some insite on how they think my book is going to turn out?

[Karla Alcorn]

[Frances Pawley]

Karla, As much as I would like to read your blog I cannot do so because of the red print on the black background. Anyone suffering from Migraine, as I do, couldn't possibly read this. It would be much better in black and white, and at least readable. When you have changed it I should be pleased to read it and give you my opinion. Until then, I'm afraid I cannot give you a review.

[Silvano Velez]

Well, I read it. I don't believe the contents. Seems like a shock fiction, but way over the top.

As for the blog and asking for a review, this is not a blog reviewing site. Put it in print, although with your current contents, I can't see you filling more than 4 pages for a book. But anyways, put it in print then ask for reviews. As of now this could be considered spam just to get a couple of extra hits on your blog.

[Teresa Hill]

I think if you done this with black words with a white background would be a lot better and easier to read. It hurts my eyes and head to look at it with the black background and red words. I know that you're trying to make the blog look appealing, but doing it this way way may deter possible readers. I hope this helps. Good luck.




Victoria

[Julie Dawson]

I couldn't get by the first three sentences. Piss poor internet grammar. Missing words. Run-on sentences. Paragraphs not indented or even separated for ease of reading. True or not true isn't even the point. It's badly written.

[Frances Pawley]