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This was a very poorly written book. There was no inspiring plot line and the writing should not even be mentioned. No well-written book has much in all caps, which can be obnoxious and hard to read. The romance is so obvious that we are all wondering if the main character is mentally ill, and this is somewhat confirmed with her constant anger issues. Knowing what high school is like makes me think that the author of this story must be of a very juvenile age, and the writing and vocabulary hints at this as well. Ms. Walker it is plain that you have done no editing and that you have not read or understood many great novels. Even television should give you a better idea of what high schoolers... More > do. Frankly, seniors do not wish to spend time alone in a hotel room with a girl throwing food. It would be a little more x-rated so to speak. I appreciate your attempts at writing such "mature" literature, and I also did this at a young age, with similar results. If you are interested in young adult books, such as the one you have written, you should read something along the lines of the "Gossip Girl" series, or books written by Meg Cabot. Those give a better hint at teenage life, and can help you improve your writing. Good Luck. < Less

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"the best teen romance/comedy!!!" I really enjoyed reading this book!! I could relate to Kate in lots of ways! It was funny and romantic. I laughed the whole time while I was reading it. The only thing bad I have to say about it was that there were quite a few errors that need correcting. Besides that this book was awesome. I think you should send this to a traditional publishing house. It's that good!!! Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to read your next book!!! That is if your planning a next one-and I hope you are!!

I really liked the story line, and the characters were great! There were a few grammatical errors that at times made the story hard to understand, but otherwise, very well written! Would love to see Kate as a college student, and what happens with her and Matt!

Her life definitely doesn't suck! It was so fun readin' the entire story. A perfect teen rom-com story, I would say. I'm in love with the characters. But there are few grammatical errors that require editing. Overall, it was awesome!!