Ratings & Reviews

Log In to review this item

Review Shadows of Dawn: A Poetic Revelation-Renaissance

Your Rating:
Not Yet Rated Not Yet Rated Not Yet Rated Not Yet Rated Not Yet Rated
Lulu Sales Rank: 12564
Log In to rate this item
. . . . . Not Yet Rated  

10 People Reviewed This ItemShow: All Reviews

. . . . . No Rating  
Aug. 5, 2006 By Khara House
"Well, it's a start . . ."
I read quite a bit of this poetry. While I found it interesting, I wouldn't call it quite Romantic poetry, or very much along the lines of Wordsworth or Coleridge. Some of the versing feels somewhat forced, as though a not quite captivated immitation of a style; yet much of the poet's words would have been quite beautiful in a style of its own. The images are quite lovely, but some become a bit cliched after a great deal of use; perhaps a bit more variety is warranted. I also had a bit of a problem with the author's use of dates; specific dates were well and good, but subheadings such as "Probably the Fall of 2000" added little to the poem-- it was as though the... More > poet was hoping this would someday become a Norton Anthology in and of itself.
On the other hand, the poet has captured a great deal of imagery in relatively short poems, which make for interesting reading at different times. Some poems make for beautiful imagistic poems. And the image of Christ as presented is undoubtably something of unique and beauty. Overall, the work was for the most part enjoyable, but still needs something-- perhaps something of the more original, less immitative-- before laurels and awe converge upon it. < Less
. . . . . No Rating  
Mar. 20, 2009 By Emanuel Yarbrough
"Re: Re: Thanks for the Review" Thanks for the review.
Emanuel
. . . . . No Rating  
Apr. 10, 2006 By Ian Ruxton
"Re: Re: majestic, like ocean waves" Thank you for the clarification. I think I remember that 'The curfew tolls the nell of parting day'is an iambic pentameter, isn't that from Gray's Elegy? Anyway, it's marvellous to find somebody with such mastery of the craft. Congratulations! Ian
. . . . . No Rating  
May. 28, 2005 By josephine thompson
"Old world style of writing" The style of poetry is clearly 'old world' with a a strong spiritual twist. The rhythym is continuous and almost unbroken at times, but with a clear message and theme. It takes a certain level of skill to aquire this effect and it seems the author knew his style when he likened his poetry to Coleridge and Frost.
. . . . . No Rating  
Jan. 15, 2007 By Gloria Slater
"Shadows of Dawn" Way to go! I have a BA in English Literature. I had to read lots of old world poetry. I love all kinds of literature and I think it's great to see we still have one of the masters with us. Your strong faith is a gift along with the poetry. Thank you for exercising both in creating these wonderful masterpieces. I'd encourage everyone to read them. Thanks, again. You may like to take a look at my storefront in another week or so. I'm waiting for the proof on my novel, Lumen Seek the Light and I am working on publishing my own book of poetry. Keep up the good work! Gloria Slater

You Recently Viewed

[Loading...]
 

Product Details

ISBN 978-1-4116-1136-8
Copyright Standard Copyright License
Published September 20, 2004
Language English
Pages 149
 
Binding Perfect-bound Paperback
Interior Ink Black & white
Dimensions (inches) 6.0 wide × 9.0 tall

Tags

Log In to tag this item

Tag This Item

Separate tags with commas, e.g. "monkeys, beans, fiction"
There are no tags for this item.

Listed In

Poetry