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Sep. 30, 2009 By a Lulu User
"Good travel companion" I just finished Timely Persuasion and found that I just couldn't put it down. I actually missed my subway stop once.
I'm not one for sci fi books but the musicology and focus on the interpersonal relationships of the protagonist had me intrigued. The time travel details get a bit confusing at times but it doesn't take away from the actually story of the quest our hero is on to save his sister. This would make a fabulous movie with a kick ass soundtrack. I often found myself googling the author's musical references for the full effect. It is a good read for a plane trip or vacation.
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Feb. 22, 2009 By Darren Edwards
"LaCivita is a bloody genius !!" How did he come up with this stuff?!

To me this time travel idea was something I had never seen before. Very original indeed.
The use of song lyrics was great.
The idea of covering songs that had not even been written yet, was always something that I thought I'd do if I could go back in time. I would write all the hits. LOL!
In parts I did find it complex, all the paradoxical stuff, but I did get it, I think :) Very, very clever indeed.
LaCivita is definitely a great writer, with brilliant ideas.
If I have one tiny criticism, there could have been tiny bits of fat chopped, eg. when he plays all the card games by himself in the cell, and lists everything. There were a couple of things like that that could have been chopped, but that is a very minor thing, and just my view point.
I can totally see this book as a movie.
All in all, fantastic !!
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Feb. 7, 2009 By Bryan Davidson
"the time has come"
I’ve dreaded writing this review because I know the guy that wrote the book. I was afraid I’d have to fill this post with lots of platitudes and niceties that wouldn’t really get at my true opinion. Luckily, I don’t have to do that. Why? Because Timely Persuasion is actually a good read.

So for those that haven’t read the other reviews out there or the cover copy, this is a story about a time traveler by accident who tries to prevent the death of his sister. Along the way he investigates one of the greatest mysteries in rock (I was sure Courtney was going to be involved, but alas… ), turns his father into a folk rock star, seriously messes around... More > with his family history, and uncovers some suitably nefarious mad scientist stuff. And in the end learns something about what happiness really does mean. That may sound a bit vague … but you’ll just have to read the book.

Now, what I didn’t like about the book was the time travel mechanic bits got a bit too clucky at times. No only did I find some holes in the theories but also found my eyes glazing over a bit and skimming through it. I also found that the narrator was a bit too casual about some of the occurrences: like when he ran into one of his future/past selves locked up in an institution babbling gibberish he’s remarkably calm and pops in and out without much thought. Myself, I’d be a couple degrees above freaked out. Other reviewers have also commented on intriguing ideas (like stealing music from the future) that are some what brushed aside, and I will agree that there are points where I found myself wanting more.

But even with these problems, I found myself hooked. I was quickly flipping through the book especially toward the end: the pace is quick enough and the situation intriguing enough that you get sucked into that “what’s going to happen?” question, which is the hallmark of a good read. And even though I mentioned the clunky time travel mechanics, I will say that it keeps the brain moving in a good way. The writing is very well constructed and professional (I would expect no less though).

All in all, I would totally recommend this book to anyone looking for a fun book that is not too dense but not all fluff either. Because of that, this is hands-down and excellent beach book (which is where I read most of it), and would be great on a plane or on a long car trip with mom & pop.

Kudos Jacob … I look forward to the next one. < Less
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Apr. 27, 2009 By Devon Kappa
"A good summer movie"
Timely Persuasion reflects a peculiar phenomenon that is common in mass-market releases, where hired gun publicists write the back-cover copy, but is less usual in the do-it-yourself POD world. To be blunt, Timely Persuasion's misleading plot blurb (as seen above) makes a fun novel sound absolutely cheesy. Based on the official description (with its promise that the hero is "friends" with Cobain and Hendrix and also "crosses paths" with assorted other rock luminaries), I suspected that Timely Persuasion would be a series of trite wish-fulfillment trysts between a thinly-veiled author-stand-in protagonist and his musical idols, which in the end... More > would add up to little more than a collection of fanboy fantasies.

Happily, Timely Persuasion absolutely does not go down this road. The conceit of the novel is that time travel is possible to any date that resonates strongly in the traveler's memory. For our time-traveling protagonist, those days often have rock music significance. However, our hero does not actually interact with his music idols. Rather, although his remembrances of important music dates are the springboard from which he launches his travels through time, they really are just the backdrop to his real mission: to prevent his sister's suicide.

And so Timely Persuasion ends up being much more enjoyable than the the above description had led me to expect. The writing is professional and polished, and author Jacob LaCivita does an admirable job keeping the complex mechanics of his recursive plot clear for the reader. At times his exposition is a bit too blunt, as one character will spell-out for another exactly what is going on. But that's really no different than Doc Brown drawing on the blackboard to explain the intricacies of time travel for Marty in Back to the Future Part II. And Timely Persuasion is clearly a summer movie at heart.

Of course, as I've mentioned before, big-studio summer films are known for being fun and clever, but also for ultimately being disposable. Indeed, Timely Persuasion raises a number of intriguing issues that it never fully explores. For example, the narrator at one point funnels hit songs from the future to a singer from the past, in order to advance the past performer's career. He expressly recognizes that in doing so, he is effectively depriving the future (original) artists of writing (or profiting from) their own songs. Maybe it's just me, but I find the implications of that fascinating (not just in the chicken-and-the-egg paradox sense; what I really find interesting is the ethical and artistic issues). And so perhaps it is unfair of me to criticize LaCivita for staying focused on the tale he wanted to tell, rather than going off on a tangent that I was interested in. But it is very frustrating to have interesting themes explicitly raised, only to be quickly brushed off to the side.

Nonetheless, high-concept films and novels definitely have their place, and Timely Persuasion fits solidly in that category. I enjoyed it for its substantial cleverness, breezy style, and pleasingly convoluted plot, which had just enough pathos at the end to give the journey some substance. If I'm a bit dissatisfied with Timely Persuasion, it is only because I would have liked more focus on some of the side-issues. But even as the novel stands, it is great for beach reading, and there's absolutely nothing wrong with that.

However, I would still change that back jacket copy. < Less
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Dec. 26, 2008 By a Lulu User
"Brilliant Who-Will-Undo-It" Masterfully intricate time traveler novel that will appeal to the time travel geek on steroids, the existential philosopher, or the casual read-on-the-beach vacationer. LaCivita has weaved a great Twighlight Zone caper into a Sartre-esque treatise on who where are, where we are or why we are. Truly original!

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ISBN 978-0-615-18882-9
Copyright Standard Copyright License
Edition Remastered
Publisher Towform
Published December 24, 2008
Language English
Pages 242
 
Binding Perfect-bound Paperback
Interior Ink Black & white
Dimensions (inches) 6.0 wide × 9.0 tall

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