Awaiting Promises

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(6 Ratings)
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A 600 word short story. In 1955, a woman is forced to question her sheltered life and what remains of her marriage.
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  • By Douglas Gilbert
    Nov 25, 2011
    "His ring finger is barren". His gentleness should mean love but it doesn't and he is all elbows... A chore of sadness before the children return -- promptness for a tragedy. When promises can't be kept, potato skins can be tragic with more tears than the onions.
  • By David P. Press
    Nov 14, 2011
    Taut, spare, very well written. Almost no action. All the tension acts out within the woman character. Good job, Bonnie. Check out my stab at this, Channel Zero. It's free.
  • By Julie Doe
    Nov 6, 2011
    Very nice. This is how to tell a story in 600 words. Some minor grammar issues and odd dialogue tags keep this from being a five star, but I would definitely read more by this writer.
  • By Pete Dutcher
    Nov 4, 2011
    This is a very well written short story. My only complaint is the word limit, because it left me wanting to know more. There is a future novel in this, Bonnie.
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November 3, 2011
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