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  • By Hannah Gaetani
    Mar 27, 2009
    "?????" hi i recomend....full sentences and quotation marks for dialog.. but don't go by me...i'm just a critic...haha pretty good... if you wanted, i wrote a book similar, just a little bit longer. it's called 'Consequences? Screw 'em.' you could check it out.... if you wouldn't mind...if you read it, could you leave a comment or something?? i need feedback on my book. and well...yeah.. if you think i'm weird and sorta crazy, you're probably right...but don't worry...i'm not a psychotic stalker or anything. i just need some feedback... :p
  • By Alex Perez
    Aug 4, 2007
    "Say what?" Hey there, Brittany. I can tell you're new at the writing business. You should consider using quotation marks and stop with the run-on sentences. That gets annoying and difficult to read. This story was definitely not about the background of a teenage mother. It was out of control and all over the place. I think you should plan before you write or pick a different career, cause it's not working for you. I hate sounding harsh, but it was painful to read. I can see you have potential. Bring it out. Consider putting up longer stories that make more sense. I'll read the next thing you put up, because I can tell you're young. So am I. I'm a writer on the verge. Keep what I said in mind. Alex, Age: 14
  • By Brittany
    Mar 16, 2006
    this is a very good book about teen pregnancy and the thing that happen to you if you get pregnant when you are a teen.
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Product Details

December 7, 2005
Saddle-stitch Paperback
Interior Ink
Black & white
0.14 lbs.
Dimensions (inches)
6 wide x 9 tall
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