A Cross To Bear

eBook (PDF), 67 Pages
(2 Ratings)
Price: Free
Heather Lee and Chris Michaels are back in a story that proves that in a world like ours, faith is everything.
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  • By Inez Ponce de Leon
    Oct 15, 2009
    "at times good, at times faltering" Kudos to the author for making an engaging story! The first few pages of A Cross to Bear really drew me in. However, as the story went on, it somehow plodded through. Dialogues were stilted, grammar faltered (jumping tenses, with has, have, had, all in one paragraph that should have been in one time frame); and descriptions were written such that they made one feel that they were glossing through, rather than being led into, a scene. The deus ex machina could also have been done with a bit more explaining, to add impact to the story. However, the tone is engaging, even suspenseful -- all despite the errors in style and writing. With some tweaking, this could be really good.
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October 2, 2011
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