Loss Of Innocence

eBook (PDF), 13 Pages
(3 Ratings)
Price: Free
A test of human nature on four boys leads to unexpected results.
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  • By sb3ez
    Sep 30, 2009
    "Interesting Theme" Devon, I feel that you were going in an intriguing direction with this story. I think that the plot has a lot of potential--the question of human nature and the drive to survive is a fascinating them. The violence in the story overshadowed the message you were trying to convey, however. With a little editing, I feel that your message would come out more clearly.
  • By Nickolaus Pacione
    Apr 1, 2005
    "well delivered short story" This author has some real chops in the genre. I downloaded a few of his other short stories awhile back, and finding this one after a long time since I first joined up almost two years ago. My suggestion for this author is to put all his short stories together into one collection and make them available in one single volume or try to get some of them placed in magazines all over the small press.
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October 2, 2011
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