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  • By Randy Cragin
    Apr 16, 2004
    "Escape back to Reality" Who knew a boy's life could be so complicated? I liked this because it came out plainly. It's nice to see it from the boy's point of view.The writing itself is fine. Things to consider. Using the proper name numerous times. Set a meter and stick to it. Using it more than once in the same paragraph where there is no focus on anyone else seems over done. Use the proper pronoun instead. Coma use, in a few places your prose ran over your English and I got lost just trying to decipher what the actual sentence should look like.I hope you get nothing but encouragement.
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Product Details

Publisher
Lulu Enterprises, Inc.
Published
January 12, 2004
Language
English
Pages
46
Binding
Perfect-bound Paperback
Interior Ink
Black & white
Weight
0.26 lbs.
Dimensions (inches)
6 wide x 9 tall
Product ID
39763
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