A page-turner mystery. Caroline, a publisher, tries to get the big picture on a hit and run murder. She gets caught up with Rico, who sends her heart pounding.
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By irsheyees
Aug 16, 2009
"OK Story" The idea behind the story is good. The writing is ok, but tends to be short choppy sentences. Sometimes words are used incorrectly and it almost seems that English is not the author’s first language. The author also writes almost entirely in the 3rd person, so the story lacks the feeling of the characters' internal thoughts. Also, the writing is cluttered with extra details (i.e. too many details about the care the comatose man receives), as well as some details that don't seem to fit with the story (i.e. the vote recount in Florida). With a little polish this would be a great story.
