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  • By Jack Kemplin
    Oct 15, 2009
    "Needs to be rewritten" Great story & plot for an erotica. That said, I must say that the dialog does not flow, and is not realistic, there are grammatical errors, the writing is in no way descriptive enough, and the vocabulary is vulgar and atrocious. It leaves out important details to later that should have been mentioned in the beginning, and it leaves out things that grammatically must be in there, and it replaces them with things that are not used in books like "X university" or "whatever his name is" those are not used in books, especially works of fiction. I am sorry, but I have to give this book a "Yikes!" rating, it just simply needs to be rewritten.
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Product Details

Edition
1st
Publisher
Lulu Enterprises, Inc.
Published
September 30, 2004
Language
English
Pages
10
Binding
Saddle-stitch Paperback
Interior Ink
Black & white
Weight
0.13 lbs.
Dimensions (inches)
6 wide x 9 tall
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