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    Jul 26, 2011
    One of the best books I have read in a long time. I'm not normally a "fantasy" reader, but then this is no ordinary fantasy. I can see elements of different writer here, but Jon Dow does a great job of making this his own. The writing and editing are top notch and I was hooked into the story line from just inside the start. The creativity of the storyline and the unique world that the main characters discover, will have you wondering what's next. Quality stuff and worth buying. Can't wait for the next book.
  • By Curt Naghan
    Jul 22, 2011
    I am a friend of the author, and so, when he published this book I felt obliged to buy a copy for old time's sake. I don't read fiction. I read how-to books and tool catalogs. So when I brought Jon's novel I worried that reading it was going to be a chore. I expected to read a few chapters, lose interest, and then give him a pat on the back over a pint of Sam Adams. Turns out, I read the whole thing. It wasn't a chore, it was a pleasure. It was a fast moving, no frills, adventure. I liked it and it made me want to go out and buy another book. So I went out looking. It was weird to browse the fiction section of the bookstore after avoiding it for years. I didn't get anything, though. There was so much stuff and the gaudy jackets just sorta confused me. I'll have to ask Jon what is worth a read.
  • By Chester Walsh
    Jul 19, 2011
    This is the first book I've ever bought from lulu. It was was a good read. I emailed the author through his website at I emailed to ask him about the sequel. He told me that that it's not finished yet. That kind of bummed me out because the book was good, and the adventure was captivating, but there are some unresolved issues leftover at the end of it. Now I have to wait to read the rest. Hopefully it won't take too long for this Jon Dow guy to get book 2 written.
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Product Details

First Edition
Vortical Books
July 22, 2011
Perfect-bound Paperback
Interior Ink
Black & white
2.22 lbs.
Dimensions (inches)
5.5 wide x 8.5 tall
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