This is my first novel. I tried to write something that is fun, intellectually engaging, and smooth.
"I enjoyed reading your book. You obviously have a lot of love for the
world you create and the characters that live in it. The blend of
narrative and philosophy was quite nice, as one was often reflected
in the other, with neither being too heavy-handed."
"WOW! What twists. I love love love love love the twist/neuro-thing with Craig.
I mean, it rings a little comic-book-ish (accidental super hero,
know what I mean), but in this context it's great.
It really makes the General and his "side" seem fallible and that's
needed. Up to that point they were invincible and that was getting old.
Very good timing on that twist, too.
You've done a great job of starting general and then engaging the reader
in hour-to-hour action. I fully expected to spend time writing comments
in your book cause I would reach a break and want to type. Never... More > happened."