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  • By Eric Begbie
    Jun 23, 2009
    "Keep it up" I think it is great, in this day and age, that any 18 year old guy is willing to try some creative writing. When's the full length novel coming? Good Luck.
  • By Martin Barker
    Dec 31, 2008
    "Re: A good start" hay thanks alot for your comment. I appreciate you taking into account the grammer mistakes and how it doesnt hold the book back too much, as to be honest it is how i would talk and so how i wrote it. Am really glad u found it engaging as that was my main aim to try and get people interested in a story that on the outset they may not have had much interest in. Thank you alot for you comment
  • By David Jones
    Dec 6, 2008
    "Amazing style" I love the way in which you have started to write this short story; the conversational attitude you have is pure bliss to read. This being your first story: I can not wait to read future ones. David.
  • By Anne Rogers
    Oct 24, 2008
    "A good start" I read 2 pages of the preview, which is more than I expected to read. I like your chatty relaxed style; it's very good. It draws the reader in and gets them involved. The grammar is not always perfect but to me it didn't matter, it suits the style of the writer. After all it is about an 18 year old not some mature academic. I'm assuming this is your first attempt at writing a story; well done. You should keep writing you have talent. Regards Anne
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Product Details

Barker Books
October 6, 2008
Saddle-stitch Paperback
Interior Ink
Black & white
0.22 lbs.
Dimensions (inches)
5.83 wide x 8.26 tall
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