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  • By James Stephens
    Jul 10, 2010
    Appearing to jump on the bandwagon of the Harry Potter series (yawn!) this book is very poorly written, clearly by a writer who has no idea about character, point-of-view, plot development etc. A first year student could do better. The story is not clearly presented, and in some chapters, the point of view jumps from character to character which is very confusing for the reader. The writer need to pay attention to this but it seems he has no idea what "point of view" even is! This story would be well served by choosing one character as a "narrator" and tell the story from their point of view only. The plot lacks structure and coherence as well. To make matters worse, he does a lot of "telling" rather than "showing" - another golden rule of novel writing that is broken throughout the book. Add to this some grammatically ridiculous sentences (has this book even been properly edited? Does the writer understand basic English grammar?) and the book... More > becomes more or less unreadable.< Less
  • By Peter Leslie
    Nov 7, 2007
    "Yotum age 14" i have to tell you that ur books are soooooo good! there incredable
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Product Details

Second Edition
Peter Leslie
June 4, 2010
Perfect-bound Paperback
Interior Ink
Black & white
0.8 lbs.
Dimensions (inches)
6 wide x 9 tall
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