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  • By Michael Sorensen
    Oct 15, 2009
    "A very nice first effort!" Sarah, I loved your title, and cover art. Awesome! My wife thinks the title is 'horrible' but she says it with a laugh--which means you accomplished exactly what you set out to accomplish. Your writing is good--a round of editing would not hurt you--but it is certainly readable. Some presentation errors--ie; you should have justified the right margin. This is very possibly a choice you made deliberately--so I am not too worried about it, but the use of numbers--ie: '3' instead of 'three' is a bother. Publishing rule is--if it's under 100, or is a common exponent (100, 1000, 1,000,000)you spell it out, otherwise numbers are okay. Again, a good editor whould help you tremendously--but I know they are an expense. Anyway, good luck with this--it's a fun little read! Micheal Sorensen--Miren Publishing Group
  • By sarah christenson
    Feb 29, 2008
    "Re: A very nice first effort!" Just wanted to thank you for your kindly review and words of advice. I actually picked up on that '3' vs 'three' thing recently and have adjusted it on my current writings, but thanks so much for pointing it out. Second book is due out this summer! Also my science fiction series is well under way (completely different genre, writing style, etc) and the first book will be finished late spring. ~Sarah Christenson
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Product Details

First Edition
January 13, 2008
Perfect-bound Paperback
Interior Ink
Black & white
1.04 lbs.
Dimensions (inches)
5.83 wide x 8.26 tall
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