This unfinished work of some 46,000 words was begun as a sequel to 'Pony Girl Zesty' and should only be read by those who have perused that lengthy story. It is a treat for the aficionados of the... More > human equine, but its perspective, Female Dominance with both female submission and some male submission as well, may tend to frustrate more than arouse some readers. (I was writing at the time for my own satisfaction, never fully expecting that this stuff would be publishable).
As suggested, please feel free to offer a proposed ending. I may get back into the story and complete it, though that is more difficult than one would suspect.< Less