Hadassah was worried about this new husband her father had betrothed her to, the Prince Royal. What would he be like? She had heard all sorts of strange things about him, his father, his friends, and his plans.
Ishvi, on the other hand, was angry. His foolish uncle had gone and joined in the rebellion and now he, Ishvi, was paying the cost: having to marry some girl that Seth, the prince, would pick for him, and then having to participate in some crazy plan that he had dreamed up.
But both of them were seriously upset that they weren’t going to be able to be human!
A Sequel to Island Peoples, Come the Day starts up where that story leaves off... with Seth, Mgwan, Sean, Wynforr and Tristan joined by Ishvi, Sionr, and other new characters. Add in a new land and plenty more transformations, and you have quite an adventure!
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By Craig TIMKO
Mar 19, 2011
I read this story for free on his own website. Sadly amateurish. Original concept but very poorly executed at a basically 6th grade level, grammatically, syntactically, plot wise, and in every way that English 101 students are taught NOT to write. Poor user of dialog as far as moving the story along, tells you more than shows you regarding important concepts. Contains slave like forced marriages, which were deeply offensive. Also contains abundant transhumanism/transspecies references, which are deeply disturbing ethical issues and is strictly forbidden in biblical terms. As a biblically based Christian, I object to this authors clearly stated New Age worlddview as elucidated in this story. Even if you are not a christian, this story also fails on the literary level as being embarassingly amateurish, and so is a total waste of time to read, let alone pay for. My advice to this author is to sell book/script ideas and let someone else execute them.
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