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  • By Lester John
    Oct 15, 2009
    "The Ninja Guild" My 8 year old son has recently developed an interest in Ninjas after playing a game about it, so I bought him a comic about it. However, when he finished it, he kept pestering me and so I bought him this book with Lulu premium discount as something to get him interested in reading. But when he returned it to me pointing to swear words I took it upon myself to look through and see if it was suitable. As I read it, I realised it was written strangely, mixing script with novels. Eventully I thought it was so strange I decided to write a review. For one, I didn't think the script style worked well particually. It was odd and couldn't get across emotion, even with characters who had 'mini chapters'. These mini chapters were sometimes longer than the normal ones. Also, the ending was a bit too soon, not much of a cliffhanger. Some bits seemed strange, particually the fact that many characters were un-needed. The characters Yomikusi and Ichi seemed near... More > pointless wereas Wickedform could have been done more with. But he was killed off. On a good note, the villians were inventive and the spelling was okay in some chapters. I particually like the part called the 'Fullmetal Legend' and the last chapter of part 6. Some bits though were shabby, like the Dragon part. That could have been extremely good but wasn't pulled off well. All in all, a good attempt by somebody calling themselves 'Wombat333'. Not sure what that's about. I'm letting my son read it again although i've crossed out the more excessive language and a sexual refference. My son is enjoying it and asked for the second one when it comes out. I think this series could have a lot of potential. I may purchase the second one if I can get it for 1 dollar through Lulu premium discount.< Less
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Product Details

September 5, 2006
Perfect-bound Paperback
Interior Ink
Full color
1.24 lbs.
Dimensions (inches)
8.26 wide x 11.69 tall
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