Red Chronon, masters of fire, pain, and death magics... Blue Chronon, masters of joy, water, and healing magics... Brown Chronon, masters of earth and elemental magics... White Chronon, masters of air, ice, and joy magics... The Chronons are at war, but when a threat greater than any of them could imagine comes, they must bind together to defeat it...
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By Jo Walker
Mar 12, 2009
"Not too bad..." The storyline is interesting, sounds like something from a show that my kids watched and then they had a video game to play from it. The writing style is good, makes for a good read, reading the preview does make me want to finish the story, keep it up...so far so good. Jo Walker author of Lizzie: A Time For Growing.
"A quick and easy read" It's a good sign and so far I enjoy the story. This maybe a book that would sell well on the youth market and with a little work could go places :)
"Preview" I read your preview and I thnk you have great potential as a fiction writer. What little I read seemed a bit amateurish to be frank and I suppose it is geared towards a younger audiance. I honestly would not buy it myself. Never give up. Keep improving and you'll make it!
