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Walking With Summer Dreams: Short Fiction

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Walk with us on this fine summer's eve through a land of fantasy and terror, of magic and love, a land where dragons fly and the devil only wants to talk, where fairies steal the hearts of unwary men and a cook feeds the fates. Walk with us on this fine summer's eve, as we show you our dreams. Cover art by Darren Britton.
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  • By Harrison Davies
    Mar 31, 2012
    I recently had the pleasure to read and review a new piece by author WILL ENGLISH entitled WALKING WITH SUMMER DREAMS. It is a series of seven short stories bundled into one convenient package. First off I want to say that English has a vivid imagination, and as his skills grow, he will be one to watch out for. That is not to say that his story is not worthy of your attention, far from it. From the outset, this is not a book for children, and due to the language and sexual references, I would state that this is an adult oriented book. All in all, you won’t be disappointed with this series of stories. There are some improvement I’d like to see in a future revision, such as that author needs to use less exclamation points (!). You can show a character is angry, or emphasise a point without their use. I think the author skips ahead of himself at times, and assumes that his audience is on the same wavelength as he. He misses sections of explanation at times, and it is left to the reader... More > to fill in the gaps. It’s not a bad thing necessarily, just mildly annoying. My final word to the author is when writing a new scene, STOP, turn 360 degrees, take in everything you see and feel, and write about it before moving on. Do the same with how your characters feel and react. Think, “Why do they act this way?” and then convey that to the audience. Most of all don’t give up on the dream, you have a wonderful voice, use it to it’s full. Reviewed by Harrison Davies (author of The Aduramis Chronicles)< Less
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Product Details

ISBN
9781257910137
Edition
Fourth Edition
Published
March 31, 2012
Language
English
File Format
ePub
File Size
404.76 KB

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